Suggestions and Good Ones

SUGGESTION
One edit we would change was when Cesar and Isaiah were talking at the lunch tables. We noticed that the camera was moving up and down on that scene. We think you should cut that part out.
-John and Joselyn
another thing you can do is actually try to show the message to your viewers i really didnt get what the value of this video was
Jose
We think that you might add a shot right after this extreme close up of another extreme close up of the first swing/slap/punch thrown
-Ivy
But our strongest suggestion is next time don’t make it look childish because this video looked like a little cartoon not a good value video
-Anonomyous
GOOD
I liked this one shot of Isaiah that got speeded up when he was running across the tables it caught my attention during the video
-Krystian and Zoie
We especially like the extreme close ups of Joe and Cesar during the final fight scene because it helped emphasize the idea that Cesar took Isaiah’s advice to heart and he is ready to fight
-Ivy
We think the most important clip for the music is in the beginning when the bully comes out of the bush
-Anonomyous
titles in between the clips of that moment going to another time were good titles
-Anonomyous
What we really liked about the video was how it was up beat and went with the flow , it wasn't choppy and i understood it.
-Michelle
The conflict was between an innocent kid and a bully.
-Eduardo E, Ashley P, and Sabrena
The first use of music is when the bully came in the scene. It was used to emphasize the idea that the bully was tough.
-Eduardo E, Ashley P, and Sabrena
The music was most important before the fight because it emphasized the mood, which was a little violent.
--Eduardo E, Ashley P, and Sabrena
The shots that contributed to the rising action were when Isaiah and Cesar were talking to each other about the fight in the beginning and the close ups of Isaiah N.'s face and Cesar's face when they are about to fight.
--Eduardo E, Ashley P, and Sabrena

This added some tension and pretty much showed what was going to happen in the next clip.
-Eduardo E, Ashley P, and Sabrena

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We planned our shots by just shooting in the right location. What I realized during the filming of this video that you have to shoot all angles of one person firsts and then shoot the other person. I believe we did follow the rule of thirds because Isaiah was in the right side of my shoulder and the perspective was strategically planned. The over the shoulder I think are used to make it seem like the audience is in the conversation. The dialogue seemed very realistic and feels like an ordinary, everyday situation. Editing that wasn't very dificult because the conversation was straightforward. The mood was not very serious because it was just a regular conversation. I believe that the idea of over the shoulder shots can make a video better because it adds a bit more of realism.

5 Things I Learned About The Cyberbullying Videos Part 2

Right off the bat I liked the beginning in which Jose and Taylor are both on screen shouting that cyberbullying must end now. I felt that it was a powerful start for the video and caught the attention of the audience and wished that my group could have done that too. I also like the fact that at 0:24-0:43 that they used three guys to explain what cyberbullying is and why it is bad. I wished I could have used this technique because it helped illustrate the fact that some people don't know what cyberbullying is and helped move the plot of the video.

Holiday Video

First of all I really enjoyed making the holiday video. Second it was not an easy task to do. With my partner I had to help him alot, for example, in the green screen adjustments I had to fill him in about using the correct function to eliminate the green screen. My partner helped me by helping me edit the video especially with the music. Without him in the editing process I don't think we would have finished this video.

I specifically worked on overall editing. It wasn't easy because of the timings we had in our video. I think it was pretty cool the way we edited the video because it gave it an original feel. The music was handled by Juanmanuel because he is an expert at editing music. Without his musical expertise I could not have accomplished in finishing this video.

Had we given another chance to complete this project I think we could have done a better job on our video. I could have adjusted the audio in the video better, properly cite the material we used in our video, and really just had fun making our video. It was just very dificult due to the short time frame we had to work on this project.

5 Things I Learned About The Cyberbullying Videos Part 1

Between 0:00-0:10 I really liked how this group used cell phones to introduce the topic of cyberbullying. It was very clever and I wished I could have incorporated that into my video. I also liked that in 0:35-0:41 that while Mr.Vela is talking they show a scene where he takes a troublemaker into the office to show the effects of cyberbullying and what could happen. I felt that truely emphasized a point because that can actually happen. I really liked the video time 1:06-1:22 because they show three easy steps to prevent cyberbullying while someone appears to be walking away from cyberbullying. I felt that this showed the proper closure of this video and again wished to do that with our video.